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1. My husband is more busier than me. He's job is director of concert so usually works at weekend or holiday. yes, I got married last year. but I don't have baby yet.

2. Yes, I think I have enough time to do what i want. Because I usually busy during the dead line term of work. If the dead line finished i could have time for myself.

3. These days I spend my time studying english at home or i going to watch the movies and go to gallery. I like it.

4. I could agree for my boss but if the amount of works is so much, I need to talk about with my boss to lose my works amount.

5. I usually came home early except to meet my friends after work.

6. I don't have kids yet. But I think adults is busier because I have to care about kids. I think it is one of the works at home.

7. spending time with my family or friends is more important than making money. And I think improving my skills what i want is important to make healthy mental.

8. I know the typical example in my life. Time that I touch my cellphone is more increasing nowadays. so I need to separated with my cellphone.

9. I think it is similar these days. It can be change as the nature of work.

1. My husband is busier than me. He is a concert director so he usually works on the weekend or holiday. Yes, I got married last year. but I don't have baby yet.

2. Yes, I think I have enough time to do what I want because I am usually busy during the dead line term of work. If the dead line is finished i could have time for myself.

3. These days, I spend my time studying english at home, watching movies or going to a gallery.

4. I could agree for my boss but if the amount of work is so much, I need to talk about with my boss first to lessen the amount of work.

5. I usually come home early except when I'm going to meet my friends after work.

6. I don't have kids yet. But I think adults are busier because they have to take care of the kids. Specially working moms.

7. Spending time with my family or friends is more important than making money. And I also think that improving myself is also important.

8. I know the typical example in my life. Time that I touch my cellphone is more increasing nowadays. so I need to be separated with my cellphone.

9. I think it is similar these days. It can be changed as the nature of work.


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