My favorite food

My farorite food is a cake.
first, it has many cream in there such as, chocolate cream, stroberry cream and mint
chocolate cream.
Second, there are many kinds of fruit on there such as, stroberry, grapes and orange and other fruit is on the cake.
third, I can eat many chocolate ball Such as, chocolate, min chocolate, and orange Chocolate ball. I like many kinds of cake
So I want to go many different country and try their own cake .
That's why my favorite food is a cake

My farorite (favorite) food is a cake.
first, it has many cream (creamy)  in there such as, chocolate cream, stroberry (strawberry) cream and mint
chocolate cream.
Second, there are many kinds of fruit on there such as, stroberry (strawberry) , grapes and oranges and other fruit is on the cake.
third, I can eat many chocolate balls Such as, chocolate, min (mint) chocolate, and orange Chocolate ball. I like many kinds of cake
So I want to go many different country and try their own cake .
That's why my favorite food is a cake.

 

 

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