Walk with my father and sister

I went to walk yesterday with my father and sister,
I walk for one hour and half, i was too tried, so I went to bed early,? i slept well, it make me fresh, so I feel good

I went to walk yesterday with my father and sister,
I walk for one hour and half, i was too tried, so I went to bed early,? i slept well, it make me fresh, so I feel good

 

Corrections:

I walked yesterday with my father and my sister. We walked for an hour and a half. I was too tired so I went to bed early. I had a good slept. It made me fresh and I felt so good.