Sunday was my litter brother’s birthday. I eat cakes and lots of food and I play games I helped my brother playing game. because my litter brothers is not good at game. But I’m good at game. So I helped him. My mother said you did very good job. So I feel proud of myself and I hope my birthday is soon.
(TEACHER ALBIE'S CORRECTION)
My little brother celebrated his birthday last Sunday. We ate cakes and a lot of food on that day. I helped my little brother to play a game, because he’s not that good at games and I think that I’m good at playing games. My mother said that I did a great job in helping him. I felt so proud of myself and I’m looking forward in my birthday as well.
