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Hello marj Good morning!
I am really sorry.. but can u check my interview script?
As i told you before I will get a interview next week so i preparing for interview now.
I consider that companys are foundation of foreigners, so it semms to be has a small english interview(it`s only my opinion)
so can u check my english interview script about weird expreesion or word?
Here is my script. Thank you so much marj.



Hello My name is yeonggi kim and I lived with my family in Anyang city. I majored electronic engineering and I graduated uni, last month.
While I am not an English major or a native-speaker, I have studied hard to improve my English-speaking abilities. For instance, I joined an English phone-call class, for practiced intensely to improve my speaking. Furthermore, I habitually watched American or British movies to become more familiar with the English language.

If I were to have the honor of becoming a member of Tokyo electronic korea, I will try my best to master the essential English vocabulary that is needed in my field, and also I try my best to learn a japanese language. If you give me a chance I can show u what can I do, what should I do. Thanks for listening introduction of myself.

Hello marj Good morning!
I am really sorry.. but can u check my interview script?
As i told you before I will get an interview next week so I'm preparing for interview now.
I consider that companies own by foreigners, so I guess there will be some questions that I need to answer in English.
so can u check my english interview script about weird expreesion or word?
Here is my script. Thank you so much marj.

Good morning or Good afternoon. My name is Yeonggi Kim, I'm living in Anyang City. I just graduated from the University last month and I took Electronic Engineering as my Major.
I am not an English major or a native-speaker, I have been studying hard to improve my English-speaking ability. For instance, I joined an English phone-call class, to practice thoroughly my English speaking ability. Furthermore, I often watch some American or British movies to become more familiar with the English language.

If I will be part of this company, I will do my very best to master English as well as the Japanese language which are essential in this field. Also, I will show you the things that I can do in the field and I'm willing to learn new things from you. Thank you.

 

 

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Happy Friday Ki! I already wrote some better expressions (those underlined sentences) in order to improve your Introduction. Good luck!


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