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23P sample answer (a)

When i get a cold, i just stay at home. I try to ignore the cold as i can.
But i take medicine when i go to work. and i spend a bad day. maybe i infect others.

(b)
Patients want to relieve from doctor.
But, sometimes overuse of antibiotics led to problems.
So, viruses are adapting themselves to the most widely used drugs.
So, i never go to doctor if i can stand.


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Q.6
Thesedays like a bear, i sleep well. i think i'm winter sleep bear!
But, i usually can't sleep well. maybe because my future.
I usually regret my university days.
Because i didn't think my future. so now i have to do things a lot. And i don't have full of confidence.
But now i try not to think of regret thing. because i can't change back.
So as i can't sleep well, i listen to music like classic, or R&B.

Q.7
No. i'm not afraid the side effects.
If we take medicine too much, it will be a serious problem.

23P sample answer (a)

When I get a cold, I just stay at home. I try to ignore the cold as I can.
But I take medicine when I go to work and I usually have a bad day. I may infect others also.

NOTE: Sally, your sentences are getting better. Please fix your "I". It should be capital. :)


(b)
Patients want to relieve their illness from doctors.
But, sometimes overuse of antibiotics lead to problems.
So, viruses are adapting themselves to the most widely used drugs.
So, I never go to doctor if I can stand it. 


Speak your mind
Q.6
These days, I sleep alot like a bear. I think I can hybernate the whole winter.

But, I usually can't sleep well maybe it's because of my future.
I usually regret my university days.
Because I didn't think of my future. So now, I have to do many things. I don't have much confidence also.
But now, I try not to regret because I can't bring back the time.
So, when I can't sleep well, I listen to music like classic or R&B.

Q.7
No. I'm not afraid of the side effects.
If we take medicine too much, it will be a serious problem.


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