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Most of kids in korea get a private education.My son is too busy after school too.Many parents support to kids 's education areas.
student have to do all of part in korea. For example math ,dicuss , science,swim ,instruments, art and so on. All of part have level and group. So we can't stop do that. If he doesn't to do, he will behind in another group . Sometimes my son annoyed to me. There's no other way to Cheer him up .moms said if you make effects it will gain shine in future.

Most of kids in korea get a private education.

[ In Korea, most kids get private education. ]

My son is too busy after school too.Many parents support to kids 's education areas.

[ My son is very busy after school, too. Many parents support their kids' education areas. ]

student have to do all of part in korea. For example math ,dicuss , science,swim ,instruments, art and so on. All of part have level and group. So we can't stop do that.

[ Students have to do all parts such as math, discussion, science, swimming, musical instruments, art and so on. All parts have various levels and groups, so we can't stop doing it. ]

If he doesn't to do, he will behind in another group .

[ If he doesn't do it, he will fall behind in another group. ]

Sometimes my son annoyed to me. There's no other way to Cheer him up .moms said if you make effects it will gain shine in future.

[ Sometimes, my son annoys me. There's no other way to cheer him up. Moms tell their kids to do their best, so their future will be bright. ]


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