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Hi everyone! How are you feeling today?
Are you feeling good? Actually I'm feeling nervous.
Now let's begin today's lesson.
Today, we're going to learn how to describe someone's appearance.
Do you know the meaning of the words 'describe' and 'appearance'
yes, 'describe' is 묘사하다 and 'appearance' is 외모 in korean.
After this class, you can answer the question
such as 'What does he look like?' or 'What does she look like?'

There are three forms of expression to describe someone's appearance.
the first form is like these,
He is tall, She is short. He is fat, she is thin.
It's very simple, isn't it?
These expressions are composed of subject, be verb and adjective.

Ok let's move on to the second form.
the second form is like these.
He has short hair, she has blue eyes.
He has a backpack, she has an umbrella.
These expressions are composed of subject, have verb and noun.

the third form is like these.
He is wearing a white shirt. She is wearing a red skirt.
He is wearing glasses, she is wearing earrings.
These expressions are composed of subject , be verb , wearing and noun.

Now let's use the expressions we have learned so far.
I will show you some pictures.
Here is a picture. who do you see in the picture?
yes, he is Barack Obama, the former US president.
what does he look like? who would like to describe him?
yes, he is handsome, I agree on that, any other one?
yes, he has very short curly hair, 짧은 곱슬 머리를 가지고 있죠, any other one?
yes, he is wearing red tie.

Hi everyone! How are you feeling today?
Are you feeling good? Actually I'm feeling nervous.
Now let's begin today's lesson.
Today, we're going to learn how to describe someone's appearance.
Do you know the meaning of the words 'describe' and 'appearance'
yes, 'describe' is 묘사하다 and 'appearance' is 외모 in korean.
After this class, you can answer the question
such as 'What does he look like?' or 'What does she look like?'

There are three forms of expression to describe someone's appearance.
the first form is like these,
He is tall, She is short. He is fat, she is thin.
It's very simple, isn't it?
These expressions are composed of subject, be verb and adjective.

Ok let's move on to the second form.
the second form is like these.
He has short hair, she has blue eyes.
He has a backpack, she has an umbrella.
These expressions are composed of subject, have verb and noun.

the third form is like these.
He is wearing a white shirt. She is wearing a red skirt.
He is wearing glasses, she is wearing earrings.
These expressions are composed of subject , be verb , wearing and noun.

Now let's use the expressions we have learned so far.
I will show you some pictures.
Here is a picture. who do you see in the picture?
yes, he is Barack Obama, the former US president.
what does he look like? who would like to describe him?
yes, he is handsome, I agree on that, any other one?
yes, he has very short curly hair, 짧은 곱슬 머리를 가지고 있죠, any other one?
yes, he is wearing red tie.

Hello Mark, inclusive of the lesson plan should be what the students learn at the end of the course. How are they going to apply what they learned in their daily lives and what would be the advantages of learning the course in their future major. It should be well defined for them to be motivated. Overall,you did a good job with the presentation.Keep it up, let’s work hand in hand to educate the young genre about the importance of being globally competitive in the English language. Kudos for a job well done.

For Further Exchange since you wish to send your lesson plans directly for corrections and input here's my email: narvaezmaribel150@yahoo.com


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