영작교정
목록
완료

rewrite Q7.8

Q.7
Spending time with my friends or spending free time to workout is more important to me.
However, I sometimes get confused with that. (confused is adjective. You have to use verb = get)
Usually, work to do something is more and more, making money is easier..

If i don't have to work overtime, for me, making money is more important. (I don't understand this part. Please rewrite it)
-> i just want to work at 9to6 in time.
Compare to other, i want to much more make money.
in korea, there is a pyramid. you know? because middle school, high school and until university.. until now i studied hard.
so i deserve that i get treated high annual income. but that's just for my dream. . because many people attend good university, speak well English, Chinese...

Q.8

I try to not to waste my time, but it is hard to follow. I am a smartphone user.
I waste time to watching youtube or going to shopping mall.
I don't watch a specific program. I just search for any interesting programs.

->I like american dramas. so, i search for something famous. or all is that i watched,
i ask my friends some interesting dramas.

Q.7
Spending time with my friends or spending free time to workout is more important to me.
However, I sometimes get confused with that. (confused is adjective. You have to use verb = get)
Usually, work to do something is more and more, making money is easier.. ( I don't understand.)

If I don't have to work overtime, for me, making money is more important.
-> I just want to work from 9am to 6pm.
Compare to others, I want to make more money.
In korea, there is a pyramid, you know? Because from middle school, high school and until university; even until now I study hard.
So I deserve a high annual income but that's just my dream because many people attend good universities, speak English and Chinese well. 

Q.8

I try to not to waste my time, but it is hard to follow. I am a smartphone user.
I waste time to watching youtube or going to shopping mall.
I don't watch a specific program. I just search for any interesting programs.

->I like american dramas. so, I search for something famous or I ask my friends for some interesting dramas.


수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 1회 30분 4주
번호
제목
작성자
튜터
작성일
6356
완료
[31번째 영작 첨삭] I'm so tired
sopia
-
2024.09.01
6355
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭] Thank you^^
min seock
Janine
2024.09.01
6354
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭] my grandmother
kim bo min
Sydelle
2024.08.30
6353
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭] I LOVE library
LEN
Queen
2024.08.30
6352
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭] Dear. Teacher Ayi
Peter
Ayi
2024.08.29
6351
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭] I am on a family trip!
Jenna
Melissa
2024.08.29
6350
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭] The participatory class
유미
Janine
2024.08.29
6349
완료
[136번째 영작 첨삭] Adultery problem
Rachel
Bel
2024.08.28
6348
완료
[167번째 영작 첨삭] leveltest
Aiden
Aya
2024.08.28
6347
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] Day1. Hello, Dashiell : )
Clara Choi
Dashiell
2024.08.28
6346
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭] Tomorrow is class president election
kim bo min
Sydelle
2024.08.27
6345
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭] So so
kim bo min
Sydelle
2024.08.27
6344
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭] To Days Diary(8.27)
Jemin
South
2024.08.27
6343
접수
[5번째 영작 첨삭] Thanks for the english class today
Linda
Camille
2024.08.27
6342
완료
[16번째 영작 첨삭] Surinam
유미
Janine
2024.08.27
6341
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] Take a short trip!
Jenna
Melissa
2024.08.27
6340
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] Jenny Teacher
한유내
Jeany
2024.08.27
6339
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭] Hello teacher ^^*
Peter
Ayi
2024.08.27
6338
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭] No school day
LEN
Queen
2024.08.27
6337
접수
[2번째 영작 첨삭] practice lesson 1
박고운
Pri
2024.08.27

초대한 친구가 수업을 등록하면
무료 수업 1회를 드려요!

무료 수업 1회
초대한 친구가 회원 가입 및 수강권 결제 후 수업을 등록하면
두 사람 모두 무료 수업 1회 수강권을 받아요!
Step 01. 조이영어로 친구를 초대해 보세요!
https://joy05.co.kr
Step 02. 인증하기
초대한 친구가 수업 등록을 완료하면, 고객센터로 수업을 등록한 친구의 '아이디' 또는 '이름 + 휴대폰 번호 뒷자리'를 남겨주세요!
*자녀 혹은 학부모 이름으로 가입하신 경우, 실제 회원가입하신 수강생 이름으로 적어주세요!
Ex. 친구 아이디: joy5205 / 친구 이름: 김조이, 9876
Step 03. 혜택받기
고객센터를 통해 인증하신 내용이 확인되면, 혜택을 적용해드립니다!

Zoom 화상수업 가이드

1. Zoom 설치하기
아래 링크에 접속하여 Zoom 프로그램을 설치합니다.
2. 수강실 입장하기
1) 조이영어 홈페이지 로그인 후 강의실에서 [수강실 입장] 버튼을 클릭해주세요.
2) 버튼을 누르고 Zoom 프로그램 열기 허용 → 컴퓨터 오디오로 참가를 누르면 튜터와 연결됩니다.
3. Zoom 이용에 다른 문의사항이 있으신가요?
조이영어 학습매니저에게 연락주시면 수업에 관련된 문의사항을 친절히 상담해드리겠습니다.
  • 카카오톡 상담 채널 : @조이영어
  • 조이영어 고객센터 : 1899-8695 (운영시간 : 월~금 9:00~17:30)

이용약관

개인정보취급방침