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rewrite Q7.8

Q.7
Spending time with my friends or spending free time to workout is more important to me.
However, I sometimes get confused with that. (confused is adjective. You have to use verb = get)
Usually, work to do something is more and more, making money is easier..

If i don't have to work overtime, for me, making money is more important. (I don't understand this part. Please rewrite it)
-> i just want to work at 9to6 in time.
Compare to other, i want to much more make money.
in korea, there is a pyramid. you know? because middle school, high school and until university.. until now i studied hard.
so i deserve that i get treated high annual income. but that's just for my dream. . because many people attend good university, speak well English, Chinese...

Q.8

I try to not to waste my time, but it is hard to follow. I am a smartphone user.
I waste time to watching youtube or going to shopping mall.
I don't watch a specific program. I just search for any interesting programs.

->I like american dramas. so, i search for something famous. or all is that i watched,
i ask my friends some interesting dramas.

Q.7
Spending time with my friends or spending free time to workout is more important to me.
However, I sometimes get confused with that. (confused is adjective. You have to use verb = get)
Usually, work to do something is more and more, making money is easier.. ( I don't understand.)

If I don't have to work overtime, for me, making money is more important.
-> I just want to work from 9am to 6pm.
Compare to others, I want to make more money.
In korea, there is a pyramid, you know? Because from middle school, high school and until university; even until now I study hard.
So I deserve a high annual income but that's just my dream because many people attend good universities, speak English and Chinese well. 

Q.8

I try to not to waste my time, but it is hard to follow. I am a smartphone user.
I waste time to watching youtube or going to shopping mall.
I don't watch a specific program. I just search for any interesting programs.

->I like american dramas. so, I search for something famous or I ask my friends for some interesting dramas.


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