It’s Iunch Time!

Hi. My name is Ha-nuel Kim.
I live on Jeju island in Korea.
This is my lunch today.
I see fried egg, rice and laver.
I like spicy chicken very much.
Spicy chicken is my favorite food.

Hi. My name is Ha-nuel Kim.
I live on Jeju island in Korea.
This is my lunch today.
I see fried egg, rice and laver.
I like spicy chicken very much.
Spicy chicken is my favorite food.

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It’s Lunch Time!

Hi. My name is Ha-nuel Kim. I live on Jeju Island in Korea. These are my lunch today. I see fried egg, rice and laver. I like spicy chicken very much. Spicy chicken is my favorite food.

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