a stressful day

there are lots of things to do so I have stressed a lot.
To relieve my stress, I eat sweet things such as cake, candy, chocolate and so on.
I really worry about my weight because I gain much weight.
so I am very sad and stressed.

There are many things to do, so I have been stressed a lot.
To relieve my stress, I eat sweet things such as cake, candy, chocolate, and so on.
I really worry about my weight because I gain much weight.
So I am very sad and stressed.

 

Note: Hi, Yenah! You did well on making this. However, I made some corrections. The blue words are the words I added, and the green words are the words I made corrections. Good job, Sir! Have a good day!