people’s fashion

hello. My name is ha-nuel kim, and I live in Jeju island in Korea Look at the picture.
They are shirts and pants. those shirts and pants are very well-fitting.

hello. My name is ha-nuel kim, and I live in Jeju island in Korea Look at the picture.
They are shirts and pants. those shirts and pants are very well-fitting.

 

~CORRECTIONS~

Hello. My name is Ha-nuel Kim, and I live on Jeju Island in Korea Look at the picture,
they are shirts and pants. Those shirts and pants are very well-fitting.

Red – Capitalization

Blue – Changes

~Note: To refer to a place, use the prepositions "in" (the point itself), "at" (specific place), "on" (the surface)

Example:

- On the island

 

- In the city/countryside