Today, my family went to a restaurant. There was a viking around the restaurant. I wanted to ride it, because when we went to everland, we didn't ride a viking. So, we decided to rid the viking. But dad and my brother Yuheun was afraid to ride it. So me, and my mom ride it together. It was very fun. Then I rode a spiny thing. It was fun too. Then, dad wanted to try the Viking. So I rode it together. I thought it was more fun then the first one. But dad was screaming so loud.
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Today, my family went to a restaurant. There was a Viking around the restaurant. I wanted to ride in it,because when we went to Everland, we didn't get a chance to rode in Viking. So,we diceded to rode the Viking. Sadly, Dad and my brother Yuheon was afraid to rode in it. So, I and Mom rode in it together. It was very fun. After that,I rode on a spiny thing. It was very fun too. Suddenly, Dad wanted to try riding in a Viking, so we rode in it together. I thought it was more fun than the first one. Dad was screaming very loud.
