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when I was in the military

when I was 21 year old in 2003,(I was born in 1983) I entered the Korea Navy.

Acutually I wanted to enter the Army. but I had to wait for one year to enter the Army from the moment.

So I applied the Navy. Navy is faster than Army. I mean when I apply the Navy, I can enter within 2 or 3 month. So I Served in the Navy for 2 years and 2 month and 1 day. I was somewhare in the Je-Ju port in the Je-Ju Island. my division was small. So we uaually play soccer in the out side.(Je Ju Educational University).

I was lucky. Because my Military life so easier than my male friends.(Thanks God)

when I was 21 year old in 2003,(I was born in 1983) I entered the Korea Navy.

Acutually I wanted to enter the Army. but I had to wait for one year to enter the Army from the moment.

So I applied the Navy. Navy is faster than Army. I mean when I apply the Navy, I can enter within 2 or 3 month. So I Served in the Navy for 2 years and 2 month and 1 day. I was somewhare in the Je-Ju port in the Je-Ju Island. my division was small. So we uaually play soccer in the out side.(Je Ju Educational University).

I was lucky. Because my Military life so easier than my male friends.(Thanks God)

 

CORRECTION: 

I was born in 1983 and was 21 years old when I entered the Korean Navy.

Actually I wanted to enter the Army, but I had to wait for one year to enter the Army from the time I enlisted, So I decided to apply for the navy instead which was quicker and the processing was only for a short period of time. I was able to enlist within 2 to 3 months. I trained with the Korean Navy for 3 years, 2 months and 1 day to be exact. I was assigned in a port in JeJu Island. The numbers of trainees were only a few so we whiled away our time playing soccer with a soccer team from JeJu Educational University. Looking back I would think I was lucky for the field I chose in the military because life then was easier than those of my friends who chose otherwise. Thank God.


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