My hobby

Hello. my name is joy chae.
I will tell you my hobby from now on.
The first thing I like drawing.
I draw a cute painting.
And my second hobby is playing a board game.
Thank you for reading.

Hello! My name is Joy Chae. (When you write a name of a person, make sure it is in capital letters)

i will tell you my hobby from now on (I am excited to hear all of it, the grammar is correct!)

The first hobby (make sure to emphasize what you are referring to) that I like doing is to draw a cute picture. ( or you can say, to paint a cute picture)

and my second hobby is playing a board game. (This is correct! Well done, Joy!)

 

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i appreciate your time making this email/message

Teacher Robert