Today is the Lunar new year. So we will go to my grandparents house.The breakfast was toast. It was delicious. Then we went to my grandparents house by car. In the car, I slept. When we arrived, we ate lunch. It was very delicious. Then I played with my family. It was fun. We played many things together, then we ate dinner. It is night time, so I went to sleep. When I woke up, yuheun and I gave a sebie to my grandparents.
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Today is a Lunar New Year. We will go to my grandparents house. The brakfast was toast. It was delicious. Then we went to my grandparents house by car. In the car, I slept. When we arrived at my grandparents house, the lunch was ready and we ate lunch there. The lunch was delicious. After eating lunch, I played with my cousins. It was fun. We played many games together until night. Then we ate dinner. It was night time,so we went to sleep. When I woke in the morning, Yuheon and I gave a sebie to my grandparents.
