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[Sending a Chocolate to my cousin for cheering.]

Hello Marj~~~
I was so lazy!!! Anyway, Happy Wednseday~

There will be a Korean SAT for high school seniors tomorrow.
And My cousin will take that. So I sent a chocolate to her.
Today's diary is below~~

[Sending a Chocolate to my cousin for cheering.]
I have some cousins. One of them is going to enter the university next year.
Tomorrow is our SAT day. So she is going to take that.
I decided to cheer her up by sending a chocolate.

Two days ago, I went to a department store to buy a fancy chocolate.
I bought a famous Japanese chocolate which costs about 20 dollars.
And I wrote a simple cheering letter.

As she lives in Daejeon, other city. After finishing a letter, I sent my gift in the post office.

That day was really exhausting day.
Because I had to travel to downtown, wait so long to send my gift in the post office, and It was rainy day.

But Today I got a text message from my cousin to appreciate.
Even if I was exhausted that day, It's really worthwhile!

Hello Marj~~~
I was so lazy!!! Anyway, Happy Wednesday~

There will be a Korean SAT for high school seniors tomorrow.
And one of my cousins will take that. So I sent a chocolate to her.
Today's diary is below~~

[Sending a Chocolate to my cousin to cheer her up.]
I have some cousins and one of them is going to enter the university next year.
Tomorrow is our SAT day. So she is going to take that.
I decided to cheer her up by sending a chocolate.

Two days ago, I went to a department store to buy a fancy chocolate.
I bought a famous Japanese chocolate which costs about 20 dollars.
And I wrote a simple cheering letter.

As she lives in other city, Daejeon. I have to send my gift after writing my letter.

That day was really exhausting day.
Because I had to travel to downtown, wait so long just to send my gift in the post office and It was rainy day.

But Today I got a text message from my cousin and she said she really appreciated my gift.
Even if I was exhausted that day, It's really worthwhile!


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