Today, I made some cars, and guns with many tools. First, I made some guns. Making a gun is pretty straightforward. But, making moving a car is so difficult. I try to make cars perfect. But, failed many times. However, I finally make it almost perfect! Its power is great. And speed is... um... not bad. But its wheels are too slippery. That's why my car's power is not so good. So, I paste wheels made of rubber. Now, that car was perfect. I was happy to make that car.
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Science box.
2023.01.21
Today, I made some cars, and guns with many kinds of tools. First, I made some guns. Making gun is pretty easy. But, making moving car is so difficult. I try to make cars perfect. But, failed many times. However, I finally make it almost perfect! It's power is great. And speed is... um... not bad. But it's wheels are too slippery. That's why my car's power not so good. So, I paste wheels made by rubber. Now, that car was perfect. I was happy to made that car.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 3회 30분 4주
교재
side by side 3 (Junior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
4499
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[8번째 영작 첨삭]
best friend
Angelita
2023.05.03
4498
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[7번째 영작 첨삭]
game
Angelita
2023.05.03
4497
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[3번째 영작 첨삭]
Holiday
Flei
2023.05.03
4496
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Do you have a pet?
-
2023.05.03
4495
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[8번째 영작 첨삭]
please, easy sentence for me
-
2023.05.03
4494
완료
[110번째 영작 첨삭]
Soccer game
Gail
2023.05.02
4493
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[2번째 영작 첨삭]
work out
-
2023.05.02
4492
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
sentence correct? 3
-
2023.05.01
4491
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
sentence correct? 2
-
2023.05.01
4490
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[5번째 영작 첨삭]
sentence correct?
Joey
2023.05.01
4489
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[4번째 영작 첨삭]
sentence correct?
Joey
2023.05.01
4488
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My first Zoom English
-
2023.05.01
4487
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[15번째 영작 첨삭]
The first place is not all
Yumi
2023.05.01
4486
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[3번째 영작 첨삭]
To my tutor
Camille
2023.05.01
4485
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[12번째 영작 첨삭]
Go to the book store!!!!!!
Mary Grace
2023.05.01
4484
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Introduce myself
Izzy
2023.05.01
4483
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
예멘기사
Izzy
2023.04.30
4482
완료
[19번째 영작 첨삭]
Cafe
-
2023.04.30
4481
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
Glass bottle house
-
2023.04.28
4480
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[11번째 영작 첨삭]
I can't be a runnner
Mary Grace
2023.04.28