Today, I made some cars, and guns with many tools. First, I made some guns. Making a gun is pretty straightforward. But, making moving a car is so difficult. I try to make cars perfect. But, failed many times. However, I finally make it almost perfect! Its power is great. And speed is... um... not bad. But its wheels are too slippery. That's why my car's power is not so good. So, I paste wheels made of rubber. Now, that car was perfect. I was happy to make that car.
영작교정
완료
Science box.
2023.01.21
Today, I made some cars, and guns with many kinds of tools. First, I made some guns. Making gun is pretty easy. But, making moving car is so difficult. I try to make cars perfect. But, failed many times. However, I finally make it almost perfect! It's power is great. And speed is... um... not bad. But it's wheels are too slippery. That's why my car's power not so good. So, I paste wheels made by rubber. Now, that car was perfect. I was happy to made that car.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 3회 30분 4주
교재
side by side 3 (Junior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
7179
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
I am sorry.
Rosy
2025.06.10
7178
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
HI!!!!!!teacher!!
Edleth
2025.06.09
7177
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
Taekwondo
Maecy
2025.06.09
7176
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
Making mugwort rice cake
Maecy
2025.06.09
7175
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
School project
Maecy
2025.06.09
7174
완료
[23번째 영작 첨삭]
homework
Shyla
2025.06.09
7173
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
Hello. teacher Rishelle
Rishelle
2025.06.09
7172
완료
[91번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary 2
Anna
2025.06.09
7171
완료
[90번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary 1
Anna
2025.06.09
7170
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
Hi teacher.
Krizza
2025.06.08
7169
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
Thank you teacher!
Krizza
2025.06.08
7168
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
YouTube
Mischa
2025.06.07
7167
완료
[65번째 영작 첨삭]
6/5
Anna
2025.06.06
7166
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
I realized that you misunderstood my request.
Jud
2025.06.05
7165
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
I'd like to ask class progress
Jud
2025.06.04
7164
완료
[22번째 영작 첨삭]
homework
Shyla
2025.06.04
7163
완료
[73번째 영작 첨삭]
Tomato
Crissia
2025.06.04
7162
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
p.90, writing 2 (homework)
Edleth
2025.06.02
7161
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
My opinion 2.
Alexandra
2025.06.02
7160
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
My opinion.
Alexandra
2025.06.02