Korean history day

Tomorrow is Korea holiday and historic day.
I have to go to my grandmother's home.
Because this historical day is always the day to meet my family.
Koreans always eat rice cake soup on this day.
And bow to the elders.
and says 'New year many lucky'
And I get allowance from adults
This is a Korean tradition.
However, other foreigners are prejudiced by bowing. Koreans still enjoy this culture.
I don't want you to be prejudiced anymore.

Tomorrow is Korea's holiday and historic day.
I will go to my grandmother's home.
Because this historical day is also the day that I visit my family.
Koreans always eat rice cake soup on this day.
And we bow to our elders.
and say 'New year, many luck'
And I receive allowance from adults
This is a Korean tradition.
However, other foreigners are prejudiced of bowing. Koreans still enjoy this culture.
I don't want you to be prejudice too.