The other day, I worked at Itaewon. Because there was a big accident there a couple of months ago where many people died. Some people gathered to think about and miss their families and friends who died because of the accident. But others gathered not to think about the victims. It's because that gathering could make their business go out of business. My misson was to prevent the two groups from having a conflict. Fortunatley, there wasn't a big conflict. So, I had the time to see the passengers. There're many foreiners at Itaewon here in Korea.
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Working at "Itaewon"(1)
2023.01.10
The other day, I worked at ltaewon because there was a big accident at Itaewon a couple of month ago that many people died. Some people were gathered to think about and miss the deceased. But others were gathered not to think about the deceased because that gathering could make their business go out of business. My misson was to prevent the two groups from conflicting. Fortunatley, there wasn't a big conflict so It could have time to see passengers. In Korea, there're many foreiners at Itaewon
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