I have a friend her name is Jane but today Jane and I fought. Now I'll tell you why we fought. We have role-play at school. I want to be the dad in the play but Jane wants to. I have no choice. So I had to play rock-paper-scissors. However, Jane insisted that she play the role of a father and did not play rock, paper, scissors. So even though she said I had to play rock-paper-scissors she could be the dad. She kept insisting that Jane would in that role. So she just yelled at me. So I get angry too.
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?fight with friend?
2022.12.01
I have my friend Jane. but today Jane and me fight. Now I'll tell you why we fought. I role-played at school. I want dad. but my friend Jane want dad to! I have no choice. So I had to play rock-paper-scissors. However, Jane insisted that she play the role of a father and did not play rock, paper, scissors. So even though she said I had to play rock-paper-scissors she could be the daddy, she kept insisting that Jane would be her daddy. So she just yelled at me for you to play daddy. So I'm angry.
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