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It's writing Task 1. Please edit it Maribel.

This table illustrates the average of International exam scores on four languages from the students doing the test divided into four parts, Listening, Reading, Wrtiting and Speaking.
The average score in numerical order from high to low is German, French, Hindi and Malay. German is the highest average score among four languages in Listening.
Between Malay and German, There is approximately 3 times in Listening. In Reading, There is no doubt that Malay has the overwhelming average score compared to other languages. except Malay, The score is almost same among them.
Compared to previous two parts, The average score of two parts, Writing and Speaking, is closely similar between them. In writing German is the average score, 66 came in 1st. and Malay come in 2nd. but, there is only one point difference between them. In speaking, French and Malay have same score.
In conclusion, The students seem to be good at listening German. on the contrary, the mean of Malay on Reading is absolutely higher than other languages.

This table illustrates the average of International exam scores on four languages from the students doing the test divided into four parts, Listening, Reading, Wrtiting and Speaking.
The average score in numerical order from high to low is German, French, Hindi and Malay. German is the highest average score among four languages in Listening.
Between Malay and German, There is approximately 3 times in Listening. In Reading, There is no doubt that Malay has the overwhelming average score compared to other languages. except Malay, The score is almost same among them.
Compared to previous two parts, The average score of two parts, Writing and Speaking, is closely similar between them. In writing German is the average score, 66 came in 1st. and Malay come in 2nd. but, there is only one point difference between them. In speaking, French and Malay have same score.
In conclusion, The students seem to be good at listening German. on the contrary, the mean of Malay on Reading is absolutely higher than other languages.

Hi Kevin,I do not have the chart for this drill but I will check how you composed your writen response nonetheless during our class. I am uncertain without the chart. Pleasetake note of short words such as articles A,AN,THE and prepositions and how to use  them properly in your compositions. 

 


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