Today, I went on a Field trip to Folk Village. I can see traditional people's lifestyle. In a traditional house there were two kitchens but there wasn't a toilet. I think it is strange. I thought I'm hungry. Teacher said now it is lunch time and I am running to the dinning hall. I ate Kimbob and Tteokbokki. I finished lunch and I rode a viking with my classmate. Field trip was finished then we went home.
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2022.10.25
Today, I went to the Field trip I went to Folk Village. I can see traditional people's lifestyle. On traditional house there were two kitchen but there wasn't toilet. I think it is strange. I tought I'm hungry. Teacher said now it is lunch time I running to lunch site. I ate Kimbob and Tteokbokki. I finished lunch and I ride a viking with my classmate. Field trip was finish and I go to my home.
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