Today is sports day, so I ate a delicious breakfast and then headed to school. My mother is very happy. When I arrived at the class, I read a book, and our class went to the auditorium. My friends are very happy. We started sports day. First I sang a song and danced. There is a friend who wishes she was a cheerleader, so she dances very well. The dancing time was over and I played a game. And sports day is finished. It was very happy. Today I slept very well.
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Today is sports day, so I ate delicious breakfast and then head for a school. My step is very happy. I arrived at the class, I read a book and our class go to auditorium. My friends are very happy. We started sports day, first I sang a song and dancing. There is friend about wish is cheerleader. so she dancing very well. The dancing time was finish and I played game. And sports day is finished. It was very happy. Today I sleeping very well.
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