Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued. So both function and love are needed. Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education. Both education has pros and cons. We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education where technology and qualifications are valued. However, society should not be scared, we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
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English class presentation
2022.10.12
Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued.So both function and love are needed.Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education.Both education have pros and cons.We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education. Now a society where technology and qualifications are valued.However, Society should not be scored,we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
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