Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued. So both function and love are needed. Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education. Both education has pros and cons. We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education where technology and qualifications are valued. However, society should not be scared, we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
영작교정
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English class presentation
2022.10.12
Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued.So both function and love are needed.Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education.Both education have pros and cons.We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education. Now a society where technology and qualifications are valued.However, Society should not be scored,we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 12주
튜터
April
교재
side by side 1 (Senior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
6542
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
I have a soccer game tomorrow
Jazz
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6541
완료
[24번째 영작 첨삭]
I don't like studying
South
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6540
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
Morning exercise 1
Edleth
2024.10.22
6539
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
Contest
Pia
2024.10.22
6538
완료
[53번째 영작 첨삭]
A field trip
Rainbow
2024.10.22
6537
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
Cities vs rural areas
Edleth
2024.10.22
6536
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
Happy birthday my grandmother
Janine
2024.10.21
6535
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
My grandmother birthday!
Bowen
2024.10.21
6534
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭]
playground
Queen
2024.10.21
6533
완료
[25번째 영작 첨삭]
India clothes
Janine
2024.10.21
6532
완료
[43번째 영작 첨삭]
10/5
Anna
2024.10.21
6531
완료
[42번째 영작 첨삭]
10/4, 5
Anna
2024.10.21
6530
완료
[41번째 영작 첨삭]
10/4
Anna
2024.10.21
6529
완료
[31번째 영작 첨삭]
How to be a good student
Gresha
2024.10.20
6528
완료
[173번째 영작 첨삭]
Cleaning
Frans
2024.10.20
6527
완료
[172번째 영작 첨삭]
Playing with friends
Frans
2024.10.20
6526
완료
[171번째 영작 첨삭]
Eat Yeuptteok
Frans
2024.10.20
6525
완료
[170번째 영작 첨삭]
Playing with aunt's daughter
Frans
2024.10.20
6524
완료
[30번째 영작 첨삭]
If I had the superpowers
Gresha
2024.10.19
6523
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Thank you. Jeany
Jeany
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