Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued. So both function and love are needed. Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education. Both education has pros and cons. We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education where technology and qualifications are valued. However, society should not be scared, we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
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English class presentation
2022.10.12
Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued.So both function and love are needed.Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education.Both education have pros and cons.We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education. Now a society where technology and qualifications are valued.However, Society should not be scored,we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 12주
튜터
April
교재
side by side 1 (Senior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
6662
완료
[48번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary
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6661
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
chocolate is delicious!
Marga
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6660
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
I went Fujikawaguchiko, FujiQ
Reneza
2024.12.03
6659
완료
[26번째 영작 첨삭]
I went to haenam.
South
2024.12.03
6658
완료
[159번째 영작 첨삭]
Fashion
Bel
2024.12.02
6657
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
The last month of 2024
Anna Fe
2024.12.02
6656
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
The last month of 2024
Anna Fe
2024.12.02
6655
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
The last month of 2024
Anna Fe
2024.12.02
6654
완료
[190번째 영작 첨삭]
Watching the soccer match
Frans
2024.12.02
6653
완료
[189번째 영작 첨삭]
Playing with friends
Frans
2024.12.02
6652
완료
[188번째 영작 첨삭]
Went to fishing
Frans
2024.12.02
6651
완료
[47번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary
Anna
2024.12.01
6650
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
My Favorite Movie Transformer
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2024.12.01
6649
완료
[46번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary
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6648
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
Play with my friends and sister
Anna Fe
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6647
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
Panda doll
Heanna
2024.11.29
6646
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My favorite subject is science
Rianne
2024.11.28
6645
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
inline skate competition
Bowen
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6644
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
The first snow in my country.
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6643
완료
[37번째 영작 첨삭]
My lifestyle.
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