Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued. So both function and love are needed. Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education. Both education has pros and cons. We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education where technology and qualifications are valued. However, society should not be scared, we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
영작교정
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English class presentation
2022.10.12
Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued.So both function and love are needed.Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education.Both education have pros and cons.We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education. Now a society where technology and qualifications are valued.However, Society should not be scored,we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 12주
튜터
April
교재
side by side 1 (Senior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
3579
완료
[30번째 영작 첨삭]
So tired today
Ian"
2022.10.20
3578
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Disability
Bowen
2022.10.20
3577
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
My plan to go to london
-
2022.10.20
3576
완료
[33번째 영작 첨삭]
Ant man
Mary
2022.10.19
3575
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
The reason why I am vegetarian
-
2022.10.19
3574
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
Project
-
2022.10.19
3573
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Movie review
-
2022.10.19
3572
완료
[59번째 영작 첨삭]
Cube
Ian"
2022.10.19
3571
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
Attended sons' calss
Ian"
2022.10.19
3570
완료
[44번째 영작 첨삭]
Can you correct these?-10/19
Kath"~☎
2022.10.19
3569
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Thank you,
Ian"
2022.10.19
3568
완료
[43번째 영작 첨삭]
Can you correct these?-10/18
Kath"~☎
2022.10.18
3567
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
E-mail exchange.
Ian"
2022.10.17
3566
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Books/novel/1-1
Ian"
2022.10.17
3565
완료
[29번째 영작 첨삭]
English is difficult.
-
2022.10.17
3564
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
My friend's present.
-
2022.10.17
3563
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
vegetarian cooking
-
2022.10.17
3562
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Passion for being a vegetarian
-
2022.10.17
3561
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My vegetarian diary
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2022.10.17
3560
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
My and My Dad's test
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2022.10.16