Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued. So both function and love are needed. Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education. Both education has pros and cons. We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education where technology and qualifications are valued. However, society should not be scared, we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
영작교정
완료
English class presentation
2022.10.12
Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued.So both function and love are needed.Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education.Both education have pros and cons.We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education. Now a society where technology and qualifications are valued.However, Society should not be scored,we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 12주
튜터
April
교재
side by side 1 (Senior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
7143
완료
[88번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary
Anna
2025.05.24
7142
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭]
my daily morning routine
Myryl
2025.05.23
7141
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Despicable me 2
Dana
2025.05.22
7140
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
Children’s Day
Maecy
2025.05.21
7139
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
Students should choose decisions #2
Edleth
2025.05.21
7138
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Students should choose decisions #1
Edleth
2025.05.21
7137
완료
[36번째 영작 첨삭]
2
Edleth
2025.05.21
7136
완료
[35번째 영작 첨삭]
Teenagers should be allowed to get plastic surgery
Edleth
2025.05.21
7135
완료
[18번째 영작 첨삭]
homework <<-- good
Shyla
2025.05.21
7134
완료
[16번째 영작 첨삭]
in the morning
Myryl
2025.05.21
7133
완료
[15번째 영작 첨삭]
I lose my wallet
Mischa
2025.05.20
7132
완료
[15번째 영작 첨삭]
tidy up
Myryl
2025.05.20
7131
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Day at the school.
Dana
2025.05.19
7130
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭]
homework : >_<
Shyla
2025.05.19
7129
완료
[61번째 영작 첨삭]
5/19
Anna
2025.05.19
7128
완료
[72번째 영작 첨삭]
I had a stomachache.
Crissia
2025.05.19
7127
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
Dodge ball
Remy
2025.05.18
7126
완료
[87번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary
Anna
2025.05.18
7125
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
Teacher's day
Edleth
2025.05.17
7124
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
today whether
Myryl
2025.05.17