Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued. So both function and love are needed. Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education. Both education has pros and cons. We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education where technology and qualifications are valued. However, society should not be scared, we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
영작교정
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English class presentation
2022.10.12
Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued.So both function and love are needed.Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education.Both education have pros and cons.We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education. Now a society where technology and qualifications are valued.However, Society should not be scored,we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 12주
튜터
April
교재
side by side 1 (Senior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
4619
완료
[247번째 영작 첨삭]
22-23
Melissa
2023.05.28
4618
완료
[246번째 영작 첨삭]
20-21
Melissa
2023.05.27
4617
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
The jump rope contest
-
2023.05.27
4616
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
The jump rope contest
-
2023.05.27
4615
완료
[245번째 영작 첨삭]
18-19
Melissa
2023.05.27
4614
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
Traditional
-
2023.05.26
4613
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
Can you play an instrument?
-
2023.05.26
4612
완료
[22번째 영작 첨삭]
Football ban
-
2023.05.26
4611
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
Conversation with Chat GPT 2
-
2023.05.25
4610
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Conversation with Chat GPT 1
-
2023.05.25
4609
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My three cats.
-
2023.05.25
4608
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
Multicultural countries
-
2023.05.24
4607
완료
[21번째 영작 첨삭]
Open class
-
2023.05.24
4606
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
my best friend
Cha
2023.05.24
4605
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
May24
Anna
2023.05.24
4604
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
May24
Anna
2023.05.24
4603
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
My first sports day! (3)
Rudz
2023.05.23
4602
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
My first sports day ! (2)
Rudz
2023.05.23
4601
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
My first sports day ! (1)
Rudz
2023.05.23
4600
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
A riddle
-
2023.05.23