Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued. So both function and love are needed. Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education. Both education has pros and cons. We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education where technology and qualifications are valued. However, society should not be scared, we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
영작교정
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English class presentation
2022.10.12
Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued.So both function and love are needed.Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education.Both education have pros and cons.We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education. Now a society where technology and qualifications are valued.However, Society should not be scored,we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 12주
튜터
April
교재
side by side 1 (Senior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
5059
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
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Jeidee"
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5058
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My first aquarium
Jeidee"
2023.08.31
5057
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My Dream is job
Aya
2023.08.31
5056
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
My favorite Movie story.
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2023.08.30
5055
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
FOR VISA 2
Bowen
2023.08.30
5054
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
FOR VISA
Bowen
2023.08.30
5053
완료
[29번째 영작 첨삭]
dream holiday
Nana
2023.08.30
5052
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary
Cha
2023.08.30
5051
완료
[69번째 영작 첨삭]
play violin again
Berry
2023.08.30
5050
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Sticky bug-catcher
-
2023.08.30
5049
완료
[68번째 영작 첨삭]
deux day I will go to school
Berry
2023.08.30
5048
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
tooth
-
2023.08.29
5047
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
I went on a trip.
-
2023.08.29
5046
완료
[37번째 영작 첨삭]
Bothering
-
2023.08.29
5045
완료
[18번째 영작 첨삭]
Picnic!
-
2023.08.29
5044
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
summer vacation
-
2023.08.29
5043
완료
[45번째 영작 첨삭]
Rules
Tessa%
2023.08.28
5042
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
MOViE...
-
2023.08.28
5041
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭]
Dodgeball
-
2023.08.28
5040
완료
[67번째 영작 첨삭]
I study French language
Berry
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