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Nowdays, My concern is my future, vision. I don't know what I am good at. My friends are realizing their purpose.
But I have not done anything yet. Students who live in Seoul can be having many kinds of experiences because Seoul is so big and there are many cultural life, various people. Pohang, Ulsan where I have lived in don't have opportunities that I can go throgh. When I was high school student, I hope to entrance in a school where are in Seoul. However my dream was not fulfilled.
As I grow older, I am anxious because I feel that students in seoul are progressing thier ability but I am not. My major is industirial design. I am learning how to design well. It is fun to earn the knowledge of design's skill. Lots of talented people are in the class. As I compare them and myself, my confidence is fallin in basement.
Visual merchandize director was my favorite job, but it is difficult to learn aobut it and to be vmd in korea.
It is categorized as ditribution industry. This occupational group is rare in this city. If I really want to be vmd, I go to abraod to study it. So I have searched thing could work at the Incheon international airport. There are many kinds of foreigners in the ariport. Although I am not good at english, I like to talk with them. So their job requires high level of foreign language. l like not office work but dynamic situation that is like service.

Nowadays, I am concerned about my future. I don't know what I am good at while my friends are starting to realize theirs.
But, I have not done anything yet. Students who live in Seoul can have many kinds of experiences because Seoul is so big, there are many cultural life and various people. Pohang, Ulsan where I have lived in doesn't have many opportunities that I can go through. When I was a high school student, I was hoping to enter a School located in Seo. However, I didn't fulfill my dream.

As I grow older, I am anxious because I feel that students from Seoul are improving their abilities than I am. My major is Industrial design. I am learning how to design well. It is fun to earn the knowledge of designing. Lots of talented people are in the class. As I compare myself to them, my confidence is decreasing suddenly.
The Visual Merchandize Director is my favorite job. However, it is really difficult to be a VMD as well as learning it here in Korea.
It is categorized as distribution industry. This occupational group is rare in this city. If I really want to be a VMD, I need to study abroad first. So, I searched some work that I can do at Incheon Airport. There are lots of different nationalities who come back and forth to the airport so their job requires a high level Foreign language skill. I like to talk to them though I am not good in English. I don't like to do office work but a job that will help me to improve more.


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