hi maribel

hi ~
you saind you want me to write a poem. But I didn't write a poem since I was in elementary school.
So, now I'm confused how I can write a poem. but, I try to compose it.

Try what you want
Then you will be a man

Try what you want
Then you will feel happy

Try what you want
Then you will be frustrated

Try what you want
Then you will want to give up

Try what you want
Then you will have your person

Try what you want
Then you will know who you are

Try what you want
Then you will be a man

...... it is really weird what I write... ㅠㅠ is that peom...?
it is really hard composition. :(

hi ~
you saind you want me to write a poem. But I didn't write a poem since I was in elementary school.
So, now I'm confused how I can write a poem. but, I try to compose it.

Try what you want
Then you will be a man

Try what you want
Then you will feel happy

Try what you want
Then you will be frustrated

Try what you want
Then you will want to give up

Try what you want
Then you will have your person

Try what you want
Then you will know who you are

Try what you want
Then you will be a man

...... it is really weird what I write... ㅠㅠ is that peom...?
it is really hard composition. :(

 

Hi Amber, a poem is one form of expreesing your thoughts,it consist of ow you feel,what you feel and your angst and maybe pains in life.The reason I asked you to write a poem is for you to be able to learn innovative writing. It is a composition you may call your own. I will discuss this with you later in class. Kudos to a diligent student,I really admire your effort.