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Nowdays TV, facebook report about previous phenomenons before arising earthquake.
Many fishes are dead suddenly, many ants are moving another places, the gas smelled whole of the Busan.
My hometown is nearby Busan. So I worry about my family.
Not many years ago, The earthquake was occurred in China. Uncountable people were hurt and dead throughout it.
They lost their family, may be some people were alone. As I saw the happening, I was thinking it could't be come out in Korea.
Haeundae that the movie name was cover about tsunami 6 years ago. I am scared because I feel that it's content will be realized actually. But people's response is confliced with my opinion. They says that many phenomenon were just occured from old times, and strange people are instigating nation for earning popularity.
Perhaps, it could be that I have more worry than ordinary person. However I think that them are having safety ignorace.
The earthquake actually happened 2 weeks ago in Ulsan about 5 intensity. My mother told me that I thought our house would be collapsed. I wish that goverment act by making strenth safety regulations and are makeing nation that are worry about it calm down by accounting for phenomenon nowdays.

Nowdays, TV, Facebook report about previous phenomena before arising earthquake.
Many fish are dead suddenly, many ants are moving another places, you can also smell the class in Busan.
My hometown is nearby Busan. So, I am worried about my family.
A few years ago, there was an earthquake happened in China. There are a lot of people who got hurt and died.
They lost their family, maybe some people were alone. As I saw the news, I was thinking it wouldn't come out in Korea.
There was a movie about tsunami happened 6 years ago, the title is "Haeundae". I was scared because the scenes in the movie were so realistic. But the people's response was opposite with my opinion. They said that many phenomena were just occurred from old times, and strange people are instigating nation for earning popularity.
Perhaps, it could be that I am more worried than ordinary person. However,  I think that they are lacking of information.
The earthquake actually happened 2 weeks ago in Ulsan about 5 intensity. My mother thought that our house will collapse that time. I wish that our government will make stronger and safety regulations, teach people what to do in case of any disasters specially these days.


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