I lived in Bordeaux France and my kids go to bilingual class, that's why every morning , I take my children to school that took 20 minutes from where I lived. Last week, the weather was beautiful but this week it's grey and chilly. Lastly, Europe winter starts and I need to buy winter clothes for my children. This weekend we need to go downtown and buy new clothes, scarf and gloves. I also need to check my warm machine at home. I'm looking forward for this coming winter.
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Chilly day
2022.09.30
Every early in the morning I went to riding my kids to school. I living in Bordeaux in France. My kids go to bilingual school that ride bus 20minutes from where I live. Last week weather is so gorgeous but this week weather starts all grey and chilly. Finally The Europe winter starts! I have to buy autumn clothes for my kids. I think this weekend we are going to downtown and buying new clothes and scarf, gloves. I have to check my warm machine at home. I am looking forward to this winter.
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