This morning, I ate sausage for breakfast. It was delicious. Then, I washed my face, brushed my teeth, and went to school. I studied very hard, until it is time for lunch. I had a piece of mini cake for lunch, and I ate it fast. Then, I played baseball. It was fun. I finished another class, then I went to the Academy to study math. After I'm finished in the Academy, I went home and slept. What a wonderful day!
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Today
2022.09.27
Today morning, I ate sausage for breakfast. It was delicious. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth and go to school. I study very hard ,but it is time for lunch. I ate lunch fast, in lunch there is a piece of mini cake. And I go to play baseball. It was fun. I finish other study and I go to Academy, for math. I finish that Academy I go to home. And I slept. What a wonderful day!
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