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Second, I like to find things about science. I found out about the scientific facts of our Earth and the universe through books. Scientists have uncovered why day and night occur and how the Earth moves. And they also developed spaceship to explore space. In addition, the Republic of Korea's spaceship, the Nuri, was also made based on scientific principles. Like this, if I do space science well, I'll be able to conquer the space.

Second, I like to find things about science. I found out that scientific facts in the Earth and the universe through books. Scientists have uncovered why day and night occur and how the Earth moves. And they also developed spaceship to explore space. In addition, the Republic of Korea's spaceship, the Nuri, was also made based on scientific principles. In that case, if I will study science well, I'll be able to conquer the space.