Today was my friend Hanna birthday. We ate pizza, chicken and tteokbokki for lunch at birthday party and we played hide and seek, korean traditional game too. After lot of playing, we ate ice cream and peach and we ate cake too. It was the greatest day I ever had.
(Hello I'm Olivia's mom. She is not good at writing. Please correct sentences with high quality writing. THANK YOU ^^)
(Hello I'm Olivia's mom. She is not good at writing. Please correct sentences with high quality writing. THANK YOU ^^)
Today was my friend Hanna birthday. We ate pizza, chicken and tteokbokki for lunch at birthday party and we played hide and seek, korean traditional game too. After lot of playing, we ate ice cream and peach and we ate cake too. It was the greatest day I ever had.
Rewrite:
My friend Hannah is celebrating her birthday today. There are a lot of foods we can choose from for our lunch, such as pizza, chicken, and tteokbokki. We also played different Korean traditional games, like hide and seek. After all of the fun activities, we had ice cream, sliced peaches, and cake. The birthday party was a blast and the best party I've ever attended.
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필리핀 화상영어 주 3회 30분 12주
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Integrate Reading & Writing Basic 1
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