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The date with my mom

Last Sunday, My mom and I had a schedule to attend a wedding ceremony.
A hour before the wedding start we leaved our house. When We came out of the house, we decided to take a public transfortation.
Although the weather was cold, We took a bus and a subway.
The subway line what we'd gotten on was that I used take when I was a collage student, and my mom also had a special memory on this line because she used to ride when she go to her ex-office.
we shared our memories until we get our destination.
It only took 30 minutes to get the wedding hall.
The hall wasn't big enough to afford people who came to the wedding. During the ceremony, I was almost cried because I could control my emotion. Suddenly I thought maybe there are not many chances left to hang out with my mother.

Last Sunday, my mom and I had a schedule to attend a wedding ceremony.
An hour before the wedding starts, we left our house. When we came out of the house, we decided to take a public transportation.
Although the weather was cold, we took a bus and a subway.
The subway line that we had gotten on was the line I used to take when I was a collage student, and my mom also had a special memory on this line because she used to ride here when she go to her previous office.
We shared our memories until we arrived at our destination.
It only took 30 minutes to get to the wedding hall.
The hall wasn't big enough to afford people who came to the wedding. During the ceremony, I almost cried because I could not control my emotion. Suddenly, I thought maybe there are no many chances left to hang out with my mother.


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