나에게 퍼즐이란

처음에는 학원을 다니게 되어 기뻤다.
at first, I was happy to go to cram school.

친구도 다니고 선생님도 친절해 보였다.
My friend go there too and teacher looked kind.

하지만 학원의 첫날...
But on the first day of cram school...

첫날이지만 숙제가 너무 많았다...
It was first day, but the homework was too much.

너무 하기 싫었다.
I didn't want to do it too much.

적응도 안 되었다.
didn't even get used to it.

하지만 지금은 학원에게 고맙다.
But now It is a grateful for cram school.

처음에는 학원을 다니게 되어 기뻤다.
at first, I was happy to go to cram school.

친구도 다니고 선생님도 친절해 보였다.
My friend go there too and teacher looked kind.

하지만 학원의 첫날...
But on the first day of cram school...

첫날이지만 숙제가 너무 많았다...
It was first day, but the homework was too much.

너무 하기 싫었다.
I didn't want to do it too much.

적응도 안 되었다.
didn't even get used to it.

하지만 지금은 학원에게 고맙다.
But now It is a grateful for cram school.

 

~CORRECTIONS~

At first, I was happy to go to cram school.
My friend also goes there too and the teacher looked kind.
It was the first day, but the homework was too much.
I didn't want to do it too much.
I didn't even get used to it.
But now I’m grateful for cram school.

 

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