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Swim academy!

2022.07.22

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I learned a new move at the swimming academy today!
It was good to learn new moves with my friends~
So I like swimming academy~!

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I learned a new move at the swimming academy today!

I just learned new moves today, at the swimming academy.

It was good to learn new moves with my friends~

It was fun learning new styles in swimming with my friends.

So, I like swimming academy~!

I really love swimming academy!

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