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Express yourself1 - issue 1
1. I sometimes hang out with friends usually to have a conversation. As a social activity, i just started social networking site, Instagram, to share my life and thought.
2. I've never thought about becoming a nun, to be honest. In fact, I had a conversation about that with my friends. We concluded that if our sons want to be priests, that's okay, which means we gladly could allow them to be priests, but if our daughters want to be nuns, we would persuade them not to be nuns since there're much more restriction to nuns than to priests.
3. I believe in Rome Catholic.
4. I prefer spending my free time with my friends or my family. But thesedays, lots of my friends do not work in my hometown, Daegu; thus, it makes meeting them difficult.
There is not just one thing that i usually do on my free time. I sometimes read a book, sometimes sew something on a sewing machine, sometimes play a game with my cell-phone, sometimes do yoga, sometimes go shopping.
5. I think the quality of my life is getting better by knowing how great doing something alone is. When i was young, i dislike doing something alone, esepecially taking a class without any friends. But as times goes by or im getting older, im used to doing something alone. Whats more, i enjoy doing something by myself. For example, I prefer going shopping alone. I could spend the day wearing and taking off the clothes and could buy what i really want to wear, noy whay others want me to wear.

Express yourself1 - issue 1
1. I sometimes hang out with friends and we usually have a great conversation. As a social activity, I started to make a social networking site, like Instagram, to share my thoughts and my life..

2. To be honest, I never thought about becoming a nun. In fact, I had a conversation about that with my friends. We concluded that if our sons want to be priests, that's okay. Which means, we gladly allow them to be a priest. But if our daughters want to be nun, we would persuade them not to be since there're much more restriction to nuns than to priests.

3. I believe in Roman Catholic.

4. I prefer to spend my free time with my friends or my family. But these days, a lot of my friends do not work in my hometown, Daegu; thus, it makes meeting them difficult.
There are few  things that i usually do on my free time. I sometimes read a book,  sew clothes  on the sewing machine, play a game with my cell-phone, do yoga and go shopping.

5. I think the quality of my life is getting better by knowing how to do great things alone. When i was young, i dispised doing somethings all by myself, especially when attending the class without my  friends. But as times goes by i learned to be independent.  There are a lot  more that i enjoyed to do. For example, I prefer to go shopping alone. I could spend the day fitting and taking off the clothes that i like and i could buy what i desire to wear.


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