Today is chobok

Chobok is the hottest day of the summer

In our country we eat healthy food to overcome the heat well

So my family got together today and made samgyetang

Samgyetang is one of my favorite foods

Today,the weather was going back and forth and there was a shower, so my family ate delicious food at home and watched a movie

Chobok is the hottest day of summer.

In our country,  we eat healthy food to overcome the heat well.

So, my family got together today and made samgyetang.

Samgyetang is one of my favorite foods.

Today, the weather went back and forth and there was a shower, so my family ate delicious food at home and watched a movie.

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