Mum brought my a sandwich and macarons.
The sandwich look very yummy but it was not very yummy.
But the macarons war very yummy.
Thursday 9 June
Mum brought my a sandwich and macarons.
The sandwich look very yummy but it was not very yummy.
But the macarons war very yummy.
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My mum brought me a sandwich and some macaroons.
The sandwich looks very yummy but it wasn't.
But the macaroons were very yummy.
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