Eloise

Eloise who I meet in a book is a 7-year-old girl, living in a hotel.
I don'k know why she lives there without her parent.
Her parents may be busy for their business.
whatever the reason is, letting a little girl live alone is weird, it doen't even make a sense.
As she lives there, she makes ridiculous happenings.
If I were her mom, I would get mad at her.
Living in a hotel looks awesome, but living surrounded crowded people dosen't look convinient.
To visit hotel once months is enough.

Eloise, whom I met in a book is a 7-year-old girl, living in a hotel.
I don'k know why she lives there without her parents.
Her parents may be busy for their business.
Whatever the reason is, letting a little girl live alone is weird.  it doesn't even make a sense.
As she lives there, she makes ridiculous happenings.
If I were her mom, I would get mad at her.
Living in a hotel looks awesome, but living surrounded by crowded of people doesn't look convenient.
I think to visit hotel once a months is enough.

 

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