Today I went camping.First, I set up a tent and organized things.Then we had a campfire and had a smore. I ate eel and barbecue for dinner It’s delicious .and l take a shower. And next day It’s rain so we pulled out early and went home. It was nice.
Today I went camping. First, I set up a tent and organized things. Then we had a campfire and more. I ate eel and barbecue for dinner It’s delicious and l took a shower. And the next day It was raining so we pulled out early and went home. It was nice.
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I went camping on weekend. First, I set up a tend and organized my things. We then had a campfire and other camping activities. I ate eels and barbecue for dinner. It was delicious. After that, I took a shower. On the next day, it was raining, so we decided to pack up earlier and went home. It was nice.
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