My dream job is one earning a lot of money. Because if I have a lot of money, I can eat delicious food to my heart's content and live in a comfortable house. It's been my dream job of becoming a doctor. But as my journey as a student continue and subjects are getting harder, I don't think I will meet the standard grades so I gave up my dream job of becoming a doctor. Whenever I go to school, I always think of what my dream is. I want to know it by myself but still can't figure it out. Then I realized, it's okay if I don't have a dream job yet. I'm still young. I don't think there's no need to hurry thinking about the distant future.
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Dream jobs
2022.05.24
I hope my dream job is a make a lo of money. Because if I have a lot of money, I can eat delicious food to my heart's content and live in a very good house. And I have long been a dream gob of being a doctor. But as the grades go up, I can not study vary well. So I gave up my dream job of being a doctor. After that, Whenever I study about job in school I wanted to find my new dream job.But I still can't find it. But it's okey. Because I don't think I need to think about the distant future.
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