Writing 1

I did not know that I can write and get feed back on my writing. So, I would like to practice my writing as well. For my first writing, I would like to talk about my family. I have a father, an older sister and a younger brother. My mum passed away when I was 16 years old. My family had hard times back then. But now my father is married to a wonderful lady and they are happy together. My sister is also married to a great man. My younger brother is currently studying as a graduate student.

I did not know that I can write and get feedback on my writing. So, I would like to practice my writing as well. For my first writing, I would like to talk about my family. I have a father, an older sister and a younger brother. My mum passed away when I was 16 years old. My family had hard times back then. But, now my father is married to a wonderful lady and they are happy together. My sister is also married to a great man. My younger brother is currently studying as a graduate student.